Creative Writing Openings

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   Begin in the middle of something

   start with an action, a voice, or a precise image

   Openings that set the scene before anything happens ask the reader to wait. Starting mid-moment means the reader is engaged first and oriented second, which is the order that holds attention.

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   Choose one specific detail over general description

   'the third stair still creaked' beats 'the house was old'

   One precise detail implies a whole scene and demonstrates control. General description tells the reader what to think without giving them anything to picture, and it is the commonest weakness in student openings.

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   Show character through action and speech

   what someone does reveals more than what you say about them

   'She checked the lock twice, then a third time' establishes anxiety without naming it. Listing a character's traits is faster to write and considerably less effective, and examiners can tell the difference immediately.

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   Withhold some information

   let the reader work something out

   A reader who is assembling the situation is engaged; one who has been told everything is waiting. Explaining who everyone is and what has happened before the story starts removes the reason to keep reading.

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   Avoid the openings examiners see most

   waking up · the alarm clock · 'it was all a dream'

   These are not forbidden, but they are so frequent that they start from behind. An examiner reading their fortieth alarm-clock opening of the day will need convincing that this one is different.

Starting in the middle

The technique of beginning mid-action is old enough to have a Latin name, in medias res, and it remains the most reliable way to open. The reader is placed inside a situation and works out the context from what happens, which is more engaging than being told it first.

It also solves a practical problem in exam conditions. With limited time, an opening that skips the setup gets to the interesting material sooner and leaves room to develop it, which is where the marks are.

• Start mid-moment, not before it
• One precise detail beats general description
• Show character through what they do
• Withhold something for the reader to work out
• Avoid waking up, alarm clocks and dream endings

What 'show, don't tell' actually means

The advice is repeated so often that it has stopped meaning much. Concretely: instead of naming an emotion, describe the behaviour that would produce it in a reader's mind. 'He was nervous' is telling; 'he read the message again, then put the phone face down' is showing.

The second version is longer, and it is doing work the first is not. It gives the reader something to interpret, and interpretation is what makes a reader involved rather than informed.

Writing an opening under time pressure

Exam creative writing tasks are usually short, so an opening that takes three paragraphs to arrive has consumed most of the available space. Plan the first line before writing anything, and make it do work.

It is also worth deciding the ending before starting. Openings written without a destination tend to wander, and a piece that stops rather than ends loses marks for structure however good the prose was.

How we teach openings

We have students write five different openings for the same story rather than one opening for five stories. Comparing their own attempts side by side teaches more about what works than any amount of analysis of published fiction.

We also ban the abstract emotion words — nervous, excited, sad — in first drafts. Removing the shortcut forces the behaviour that shows the feeling, which is the skill the exercise exists to build.